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all c&c much appreciated Sapling (first draft) Peeling white bark from living giants, his work knotted hands aged and patient. Cross legging the sand, I sponge-soak every slice of the axe, just so. Native tongue chants, old sing-song guidance, dreamy rhythm now seldom heard. The giant shudders giving up his coat, baring a creamy belly to full sun. A wide track drags behind beading brows, small teeth flash wide, a mirror. Heated gum resin rolls under nature hardened heels. Pressed quickly in place and laced with sapling threads. Barefoot tracks burdened and heavy, slip-slide with laughter now wet. Delicate ripples drum beat bark hide, stripped and molded, it floats easily. Panda I really should be studying but you know how it is<grin
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all c&c much appreciated Sapling (first draft) Peeling white bark from living giants, his work knotted hands aged and patient. Cross legging the sand, I sponge-soak every slice of the axe, just so. Native tongue chants, old sing-song guidance, dreamy rhythm now seldom heard. The giant shudders giving up his coat, baring a creamy belly to full sun. A wide track drags behind beading brows, small teeth flash wide, a mirror. Heated gum resin rolls under nature hardened heels. Pressed quickly in place and laced with sapling threads. Barefoot tracks burdened and heavy, slip-slide with laughter now wet. Delicate ripples drum beat bark hide, stripped and molded, it floats easily. Panda I really should be studying but you know how it is<grin
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all c&c much appreciated Sapling (first draft) Peeling white bark from living giants, his work knotted hands aged and patient. Cross legging the sand, I sponge-soak every slice of the axe, just so. Native tongue chants, old sing-song guidance, dreamy rhythm now seldom heard. The giant shudders giving up his coat, baring a creamy belly to full sun. A wide track drags behind beading brows, small teeth flash wide, a mirror. Heated gum resin rolls under nature hardened heels. Pressed quickly in place and laced with sapling threads. Barefoot tracks burdened and heavy, slip-slide with laughter now wet. Delicate ripples drum beat bark hide, stripped and molded, it floats easily. Panda I really should be studying but you know how it is<grin
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all c&c much appreciated Sapling (first draft) Peeling white bark from living giants, his work knotted hands aged and patient. Cross legging the sand, I sponge-soak every slice of the axe, just so. Native tongue chants, old sing-song guidance, dreamy rhythm now seldom heard. The giant shudders giving up his coat, baring a creamy belly to full sun. A wide track drags behind beading brows, small teeth flash wide, a mirror. Heated gum resin rolls under nature hardened heels. Pressed quickly in place and laced with sapling threads. Barefoot tracks burdened and heavy, slip-slide with laughter now wet. Delicate ripples drum beat bark hide, stripped and molded, it floats easily. Panda I really should be studying but you know how it is<grin
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Panda I really should be studying but you know how it is<grin Sent via Deja.com http://www.deja.com/ Before you buy.
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same chant. The giant shudders giving up his coat, baring a creamy belly to full sun. i love this. A wide track drags behind beading brows, small teeth flash wide, a mirror. Heated gum resin rolls under nature hardened heels. Pressed quickly in place and laced with sapling threads. Barefoot tracks burdened and heavy, slip-slide with laughter now wet. Delicate ripples drum beat bark hide, stripped and molded, it floats easily. i like the last few stanzas, but think the ending could be cleaned up a little. i'm not sure whether floats easily is exactly the best de_script_ion. Panda I really should be studying but you know how it is<grin Sent via Deja.com http://www.deja.com/ Before you buy. Sent via Deja.com http://www.deja.com/ Before you buy.
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